Hello Jose. Your hybrid models are very good. I relate them more easily with the top and bottom chosen models and not as much with the middle one, but its not important. I think you can still mix both hybrids and create a third one or play with them and make a new one as a derivative. Both models have a lot of motion and dynamic and can become very good buildings given the exact amount of work needed (a lot of). Same advice given to your colleagues goes to you as well: keep in mind the program and the inner/interior spaces needed while creating these forms. It will save you a lot of work later and you will not end up with an impaired building (in comparison to the initial idea) that had to be modified significantly to accommodate program. Try to place the models in site and do some street shots (see Jesus Bravo blog/work for reference) so that we can get an idea of how it relate to the site.
One minor negative aspect in presentation: capital letters beyond titles it's a no no. :) at least for me. Keep up the good work. ES
Hello Jose.
ReplyDeleteYour hybrid models are very good.
I relate them more easily with the top and bottom chosen models and not as much with the middle one, but its not important.
I think you can still mix both hybrids and create a third one or play with them and make a new one as a derivative.
Both models have a lot of motion and dynamic and can become very good buildings given the exact amount of work needed (a lot of).
Same advice given to your colleagues goes to you as well: keep in mind the program and the inner/interior spaces needed while creating these forms. It will save you a lot of work later and you will not end up with an impaired building (in comparison to the initial idea) that had to be modified significantly to accommodate program.
Try to place the models in site and do some street shots (see Jesus Bravo blog/work for reference) so that we can get an idea of how it relate to the site.
One minor negative aspect in presentation: capital letters beyond titles it's a no no. :) at least for me.
Keep up the good work.
ES