Hello Jose. I'm really enjoying your work. Your analysis on space organization is very clear. I would like to see some written conclusions from your analysis for each building, you could stress the good points and bad points in each building. That would be wonderful and would set a great start for the next steps with the matrix and bubble diagrams for your own project. Furthermore, it would allow me (and your teachers) to assess what you learned from the analysis without waiting for your diagrams. One small note: I would like to see scale (graphic or numeric scale) and orientation (where is the north) in each analysis. Scale is essential for students to start to be aware of differences in scale between buildings and space. Orientation helps understanding some of the reasons for space definition and natural lighting. ES
Hello Mr. dos Santos, thank you for your helpful comments. When doing these analysis I was thinking of the spaces that work and didn't work of each building as well of how beneficial those spaces would be to include them in my project. These analysis really help me of thinking about the spaces that i should include and some spaces that wouldn't be as important as others and also helped me have a better sense for my next assignment.
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ReplyDeleteI'm really enjoying your work.
Your analysis on space organization is very clear.
I would like to see some written conclusions from your analysis for each building, you could stress the good points and bad points in each building.
That would be wonderful and would set a great start for the next steps with the matrix and bubble diagrams for your own project.
Furthermore, it would allow me (and your teachers) to assess what you learned from the analysis without waiting for your diagrams.
One small note: I would like to see scale (graphic or numeric scale) and orientation (where is the north) in each analysis. Scale is essential for students to start to be aware of differences in scale between buildings and space. Orientation helps understanding some of the reasons for space definition and natural lighting.
ES
Hello Mr. dos Santos, thank you for your helpful comments. When doing these analysis I was thinking of the spaces that work and didn't work of each building as well of how beneficial those spaces would be to include them in my project. These analysis really help me of thinking about the spaces that i should include and some spaces that wouldn't be as important as others and also helped me have a better sense for my next assignment.
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